She sits on the faded violet chair
opposite me;
one elbow resting
on the round blond laminate wood table.
She leans forward,
feet resting on the worn grey carpet.
My reading glasses
sink into the bones of my nose
as I read from my notes;
relaying the news
with my office door shut.
Her eyes meet mine
— wide, deep set, unblinking,
surrounded by a web of fine lines.
“Huh,” she says and sits back.
An uneasy pause
is filled with the tick-tick
of my desk clock.
A brittle smile forces its way
across her guant face.
She says its okay;
she’s tired
of the freeway traffic;
and the slow creeping crawl
of the company’s demise.
Prompt: Trifecta and dVerse open link night.
Powerful ending… an intense capture here!
ugh…sometimes it can be a relief you know…when you see it coming..i have had to deliver this talk…and i have received it…at least there is severence right? oy…still owed back pay from my last one…court next week…
This is the third or fourth time… I’m losing count. Exhausting. Good luck with getting that back pay.
Great words! well done.
She may see the writing on the wall, or more, but it doesn’t make it easier. A tough situation well described?
I wouldn’t want the difficult job of laying someone off, that’s for sure. I feel bad for both people involved.
Good capture…sorry.
Great writing
Eew. Talk about a difficult and uneasy situation on both sides. Well described!
That is just lovely Annette. Poetry is meant to be read out loud. So I did. My favorite sounds were the sound of her arm on the table (um, as read, obviously) and the creeping crawl of the company’s demise. YES.
Thank you so much!
Amazing write – God the details: reading glasses pushing into her nose. The tick tick – I swear I can hear it. This is an amazing piece.
Ouch. You convey the painful tension of moments like that so well, and I love that you say everything that needs to be said without actually coming out and saying it explicitly.
I read it out loud, too. I enjoyed the tick tock of the desk clock. True story? If so, I’m sorry. You’ve captured the experience well. Thanks for linking up.
I love how you’ve described her body language – simple gestures but so telling – and how the whole scene plays out from the perspective of the boss. (And thank you for using “tick-tick” instead of rhyming “tick-tock” with “clock”). Good stuff!
Oh bravo – a very well written piece capturing that awful moment in time…
Anna :o]
You captured that moment well. 🙂
Love the details selected to describe the tension of this pain at termination.
Thank you!