Playing with Hadron and Elfje

Walt and Hannah both offered variations on the hadron form prompt from a few weeks ago.  I played a bit with both of their forms.

Woven hammock,
knotted natural rope,
double wide
swaying.  Weighing
time
for rest.

Sooty
velvet muzzle
eagerly reaches out
to me — cookie
or kiss.

Thick
strong hands.
They’re sore.  Years
building me ranch
gifts.

Greenish-brown
composting manure;
the dogs snack
their breath stinks: puppy
pesto.

 

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